The strongest part about my finished art piece is about my capital “L” that I have rotated in four different ways. I have it flipped 90 degrees clockwise, rotated at 180 degrees, vertically, horizontally. I have letter flipped different ways two times each because of a shadow effect behind the original “L” that is in purple. Which is why this is my strongest part about my art piece. The part where I can improve my art piece is if I added more to it around the four capital “L” where there is some open spaces between them. So that some attention when u first look at it can go to the sides of the letter. The tools I used for my piece are the move tool, transform tool, and the 3D tool. What was easy about this art activity is when I had to move the letters around different places because of the move tool. The most difficult thing about the art piece is when I finished placing the shadow “L’s” I had to place over the ones in purple evenly on top of it. Things I demonstrated in my art...
Classmate Critique: Larissa Andrade by Eliane Pontes
ReplyDeleteLarissa photography design or kaleidoscope is very outstanding! The simple composition of her art stands out with the color and the form type. The colors she used makes her out pop out. The circle shapes in the art stands out to the eye. Her three strong areas are her compositions, color form and symmetry. The inverted symmetry she used stands out the art. I know that because the other side is the exact same as the other side for the first image. Her contrast with colors is also another great part of her art. Her second picture is very unique and colorful. She used different effects that were very appealing. She must of used hue/saturation for the color effects and duplicated the images and changed the colors every the she merged the two images and copied it.
She can though, improve trying different symmetry and used better colors. Her circles could be better shaped. She could’ve filled her picture with other shapes all around her art. Try making the colors look more vivid with the image. Make sure it’s lined correctly. Improve it by using the ruler to get the image in the right center.
Effort: 4
ReplyDeleteComposition/Symmetry: 3 (some area's are not aligned correctly and are off kilter)
Submission of All work: 4
Craftsmanship: 3.5 (some gaps in 2nd image)
Artist Reflection: 0 (missing)
14.5/20= 80%